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Warrior within by ~Elemenestra:iconElemenestra:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


As I run from the madness of the shadows
       I can feel it getting closer
        The moment dies away.
          As the second splits
           The time  runs out          
      And darkness falls around.

        My breath's unsteady
      But still my blade is ready.
            As I stand alone
        All my fears are gone.

    Another drop of blood falls down
     As the grains of sand spill out
And my enemy lies dead on the ground.
©2009 ~Elemenestra
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Author's Comments

My entry to the Video Game Poetry Contest [link]

It's about one of my favourite games Prince of Persia :D especially Warrior Within

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~InnocentFreespirit Nov 21, 2009, 9:29:13 PM
Did you try to make the text look like an hour glass?
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~Elemenestra Nov 22, 2009, 1:17:23 AM
no actually ^^` but i guess it looks similar :D

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Mood: Joy ~InnocentFreespirit Nov 22, 2009, 8:46:54 AM
It does, and that's totally cool!
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~Elemenestra Nov 23, 2009, 9:59:11 AM
thanks :D :hug:

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~Eareph Nov 30, 2009, 4:29:34 PM
Very nice. I could feel the waves of fear wash over him as his pursuers closed in and time was almost out. Then the trepidation in which he lifted his sword in to guard and as the last grain of sand fell he accepted his fate and turned to face his enemies with a stoic face.

Very nice, again. I also loved the Prince of Persia saga, I've played nearly every one.

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~Elemenestra Dec 1, 2009, 3:39:21 AM
lol thank you very much ^^ i love the games too I have played all of them :D :D thanks again

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~Eareph Dec 1, 2009, 6:13:30 PM
Your welcome.

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~Elemenestra Dec 1, 2009, 9:42:20 PM
:glomp:

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